All Comments on 'Don't Ask, Don't Tell Ch. 01'

Is where this needs to be. Didn't think it was well written, interesting, or erotic.

a well written and hot story,the story line is believeable and the characters seem to be true to life.The sex is very discriptive and vivid.A well thought out post.

well written, good lead-in, nice character development... and of course, hot!

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loved it

This was a good story. Race was not an issue in this story. I can imagine how this series will go, but it is an erotic site. For a first story, it's quite well done. Those that don't like to read about happy infidelity won't enjoy it. There are two or three classes of readers here. Your story will appeal to one or two of those classes. Few appeal to them all.

Put in the right category it would be great. With one divorce already to his credit, we see he will soon have another. And a few assists in other divorces.

Just sucked.

To betray one's spouse so casually and cheaply seems especially disrespectful. Are both of them in otherwise monogamous relationships? Does either of them have a history of genital herpes? We don't know these things because neither cared enough about their partner or themself to ask.