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by SleeperyJim

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KajkoKajkoover 5 years ago
Well done

I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship. :)

Freddog6601Freddog6601over 5 years ago
Interesting start

I honestly thought about not reading any further once I read “a pouting low pressure system “. Really, a “pouting low pressure system “! I suspected this was another story by a romance novelist wanna be who had a lot of unused flowery material.

I’m glad I ventured further. Looking forward to the next chapter sans “pouting low pressure systems “.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very interesting

Like your writing... will be back to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow

And somehow you went from this to Eegit and Conversations? You have no idea how impressed I am! Signed: BTW

Ravey19Ravey19almost 4 years ago
Good Start

Gets you interest and only 1 page.

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