by furrybert
pls pls pls continue ... and don't leave us hanging too long! fantastic!
to a story that had enough depth to make it believable. If anyone reads the entire story they would see that she just had to pay the price for her previous deception so there really wasn't any heavy duty rape. It was sexy and hot, good work, thanks.
Dispite what other negetive idiots think the story was hot. It contantly had me lookin for a climax of the moment. Good job!
shite! i'm still trembling just from reading this! just had to say that i read your first 'hunter' story before this one, but this one had even sharper impact on me. i loved it all, thankyou.
I can't wait to read more about this pair. Does he still have a need to punish her? How will she deal with her desire and shame? So many places to go with this and they could all be sizzling hot! Love it!
Please, please write what happens next! I would love for there to be much more to this story. Thanks!
...And I really mean that. You're brilliant! I loved this story almost as much as I loved Hunted. Please continue. I can't wait to see what happens.
Sean is to die for. You have to continue this story. You are brilliant!
I've read your other story Hunted and already deemed you a wonderful writer. ^__^
But on THIS one.. Just WOW. Seriously.
You have very successfully portrayed Sean as one of the most sexiest characters I have yet to read. In your story Hunted, the whole beating each other worked because Suzanne was one hellavah fighter too, but I hope that doesn't become an event in this story. Haha. Sorry. The romanticist in me want this to turn out a love story. ^^
So please update! It's just THAT great.
Please update. I love this story!
PPPPPLLLLEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEEE UPDATE! *Begs on knees* T.T
this is the best story I have ever read on this site! I've always kept an eye out for your stories, but this one is really something special. I hope your next chapters do it justice. Keep the suspense going, and don't give in to the emotional pull they have on each other too early. Keep teasing us! I look forward to more orgasms. Thank you for satisfying me.
you are the only writer of worth on the whole site. Wish I was there to serve you
I've read this story and Hunted and your stories are really awesome! I've searched through the whole site and none of the stories come close to the ones you've written. Great job!!
Please update! I love this story so much! It's really original and well written. It'd be such a shame if it's dropped. It's really truly one of the best one on this site!
Your stories are so good! I totally wish I could be one of the charachters.
Your work is just amazing. I'm not surprised if you wrote a book, yet. Your writing is splendid, and I can picture every word you write. You should write more, wether its a continuation of your other work, or new. It's satisfying, and interesting. Especially to see what will happen. I especially like your 'Hunted' work, Just how I imagine Suzanne and Sasha(?) just inspires me to draw them. But of course I won't. Keep up the good work, and good luck with future work.
You are by far the best writer on here! Please, please, please continue to write. So hot!!!
ditto
Can't see how these 2 could ever be more than just an amazing fuck for each other, but that's cool too.
More please! This was one of the hottest stories I have read in a long time.
This story was great. You're a very good writer. I (and I'm pretty sure others) would be really appreciative if you could give us a part 2...please?
muy bueno y muy bien escrito y descripto, se conjugan muy bien y tendria que haber una segunda y una tercera parte a ver que pasa con angel y laura, por favor no dejar de escribir una secuela, am_sr
to write more - so just how much does he need her? Let me know when you add some more to this tantalizing story.
This is the most erotic story I have ever read. Please, please write more.
Wow...great story, amazing plot, sexy character (Angel).
I normally don't like rape stories, but this is a really good story. Maybe I'm wrong for this, but it was a really good story. Except the teacher student part. That was a bit much. Maybe if it was in a Junior College or some other setting where the student was an adult I'd be a little more okay with the story, but the high school setting was more unsettling than the rape part. I know that makes no sense, but that's my foolish logic, lol.
I have read both Hunted and now Education the teacher. You are a gifted writer. Please continue to write. Are you published? Are you planning a chapter 02 for Educating the teacher?
Middleboro Ma fan
Soooo erotic. I don't know who i like better Sasha or Angel... i think i like both... Please keep writing... absolutely love it.
You write such amazing stories; they're very erotic, plus you can really feel for the characters. It's really is hard to choose between Sasha and Angel for favorites. Please keep writing more, it's so hard to find stories with everything I like in them!
I was freaking crying for sean all that vulgarity and need was such a turn on that im going insane. Keep this up
And wouldn't be nice to have a better idea of her age -
perhaps I missed something
Seductive rape is one of my favorite topics.... add the personal involvement of the characters and you have a winning combination! I shall fantasize about this and your other stories for some time to come!!! I hope you keep writing for quite sometime!!!
A fan... Sweetone_66
This whole concept is fab!! so ples make a sequal-- that will gradually show hw lisa's and sean realationship progessess x
We all want more! I'll even beg! Please show us more of your dirty little mind!
I've read your story at least 5 times. Love it. Please write another chapter!
I've read all your stories and absolutely LOVE your alpha/ dominating (asshole)/ sexy males!!! Very hot! I'll definitely be reading & re-reading all of them, please please please continue writing!!!
I love this and your Sasha series too...keep it coming please :)
I loved the theme, the back story, the details and the revenge. Please write more to continue this story. Will he have her work off her debt as his fuck-toy? Is she on birth control? Will he breed her? Will he fuck her ass? Will he have his right hand man join in again?
My comment is above.
If liking porn is so sick, what the hell are you doing on a sex stories site? Perhaps you have some issues, mate.
I must admit that I love it. I'm a horny 38 year old teacher and mother of two wonderful children. I've been married to the same man for 15 years and we have sex once or twice a month. I find myself reading stories like this and putting myself in the story. I try to get my husband to play games, role play, whatever, and he refuses. I need something more. I'm told that I look like I'm in my 20's and I work hard and staying fit. I have long brown hair and a nice figure. What I don't have is a man who will satisfy my needs. Is that my fault? No. Certainly not. I'm trying to work up the courage to do something about it. At first it was enough to read stories like this and satisfy myself. That is no longer enough. I want -- no, I need, something more. I need to be in the story. I'm not sure how to go about this in a safe way. I don't want to ruin my marriage or my life and I don't want to hurt my husband. I need some excitement in my life.
I have so many fantasies. I have considered calling for a taxi one night when my husband is out of town... Answering the door in my lingerie... asking the taxi driver to help me with my luggage... then drop to my knees and suck his cock.. let the lingerie fall from my shoulders... let him fuck me... this is one of my favorites... not sure if it's the best choice because he would know my address... I have also considered going out of town and giving myself to the first man I meet.... I have considered so many possibilities... Maybe someone who visits this site lives close enough that we could meet. I don't really care what you look like. I just want a stranger to fuck me hard. I want someone to take care of my needs. I need some passion. I need to be fucked by a real man. It's sad but I'm getting off just writing about this right now. I'm going to pleasure myself thinking about the possibility that a man might be rubbing his hard cock as he reads this... and that we might meet in the near future... and....
Kate
it's easy to share some fantasies here while staying anonymous. if you really hope to go further I am challenging you now to either get in touch to get your dreams and needs fullfilled or/and publish some of your stories here to tickle your urge some more. ;-)
Hi. Love this story & Hunted. The last sentence sounds like you plan to write more. I would love to see where their relationship goes. He's realized he still has feelings for her & she does for him; because this might have started as something else, but it turned into a couple making passionate love. Does she get pregnant? Does he decide to keep her & make her his woman & in the process they work out everything & become a couple? Please continue so we can see what the future holds for them. Thanks.
Please please write more! I love all of your stories but Hunted and this one are my favorite! They have been since I first logged onto this website a few years ago! You're awesome!
going from 'pharaohs wife' teacherdom to gangsters moll.
Nice one.
I have read all of the stories that I can find by you, and love them! My only complaint is that there isn't more of them. Your stories are well developed, and interesting. A joy to read.
…which I enjoyed immensely.
Keep 'em cumming, as they say.
This was a good story but the teacher "punishment" was too light. It's obvious he's spineless against her. She falsely accused him of rape so her punishment should really be extra...something like him recording a confession out of her by teasing her and withholding orgasms, or allowing his men to fuck her while he played with her tit and clit forcing her to climax on every new dick for several hours than send the video to her family and friends. Anyway it got too tamed at the end
Do not know exactly when, after strong story somehow, somewhere my excitement just leveled off. ... Suddenly, she likes it and begs for it, is just so an unreal, stereotypical and unimaginative way to end a nonconsent/reluctance story ... compare it to the many possible revenge / humiliation ideas other stories from Mailgirl universe, in Jessicas Change Management or many others from the dominated teacher genre (Owned Teacher by Thumb certainly is a classic, here on lit) use ... or the many creative ideas You used for start and middle parts of Your story ;-)
Hope for a better try and a next try.
Best wishes, Simon
Great story! I found myself craving more or Angel. Hope you write more with his character.
respectfully disagree that the "she comes to like it" isn't a good part of noncon stories, those are my favorite kind
For one thing no woman is going to be "wet" when confronted with being raped. Her body will eventually start to lubricate out of self defense. just think of it this way while you are in prison you are marked as a punk (meaning you're going to get fucked in the ass everyday). It's going to be extremely painful the first ten times but later your body will get used to this. this concept that once you rape the woman she is going to turn into a slut and let you fuck her whenever you want is living in fantasy of you own strange world. I don't care about how powerful some crime boss is with my Barrett .50 I can take anyone out at anytime so if the teacher were my friend Angel would be dead meat I'm very Laissez Faire you leave mine alone and I leave you alone
Great story but I found the ending lacking. The build up was amazing but it was almost like a fade-to-black type ending which was disappointing. I would've like the last scene to be more drawn out and detailed.
Well she got what was coming to her. She was a teacher and a teacher is one who is supposed to teach, correct and remodel a student's mind however difficult it is, however long it takes. I too was a very unruly and wild guy in my college, a pain in the ass of my teachers. I was reported several times to the principal, who threatened to expel me. And once with a bad TC, he knew that I would never get admission in any other university. A few times my father was called to the college by the principal. After that my father gave up, telling me that he would never go to my college again even if I was expelled. But I was not expelled. Many years later, when I was working for an IT company as a senior analyst, one day I met my old principal, long retired. He recognised me after all this time and my wild days came back to haunt me. I was full of remorse. We were at a mall, and I invited him to a coffee with me. Sipping our coffee, I brought up the subject that was pricking me. I reminded him what a pain I had been. He laughed and agreed. Then I asked him, " Sir, I always wondered why you did not expel me even though I had given you enough cause for it." He looked at me gravely and said," If I had done so, I would have spoiled the life of a boy I had, as a teacher, undertaken to build to be a proper man. You were a youngster, and at that age you don't understand the consequences of your actions. But I was an adult and could think rationally. I could never spoil your life."
That is the attitude of a true teacher. There are no bad students, only bad teachers. A child is a rough uncut diamond. It is the teacher who either shatters that diamond or turns into highly valuable gemstone.
In this story, this teacher was a real bitch. She destroyed the life of her student and made him into a mobster. If she doesn't deserve to be raped, degraded and humiliated, then who will? She needs to be fucked in all 3 holes not only by Angel, but by all his men and then impregnated before putting her out for whoring. Destroy her life for what she did to him.