All Comments on 'ElectOral College'

by DantesCristo

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SegxiSegxiover 10 years ago
Wow

Great story. Cant wait to find out what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very nice!

Haven't seen that angle before (campaign assistance) so it's pretty new and refreshing.

Great for political junkies too :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great story!

Holy shit, that was super intense! Excellent writing style. I hope you write a followup.

PennMusicPennMusicover 10 years ago
Actually...

I would love to see Paul find out about them and exposed the Congressman to the media right before the election so he would lose...A fitting way for Paul to exact revenge.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great story!

can't wait for the sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Pretty good

Frankly it needed a dose oof realism. Normal size tits and cock. Congressman with girl friend in public, instant publicity, she ready for the media attention? And who would fuck in the middle of an empty ball room, can't get much less intimate than that, plus you need to clean up after a fucking, and besides ball rooms have multiple doors.

The rest was pretty good, but in general keep it reasonable.

masterandmargaritamasterandmargaritaover 9 years ago
Nice!

I love the hilarious title and how you went all in on the political theme. This is great writing, I can't wait to read the next one!

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