All Comments on 'Empire of Flesh'

by xxxecil

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
A lot of promise

This could be turned into a minor Universe for other authors. Of course, the real solution for the Curse would be to move to Mount Athos - no women allowed there.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
whoa.

you have the best stories ever, that is all. EVER.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
it's true

i think most authors, even when given given

unlimited freedom to indulge themselves in sexual

fantasy, feel small pangs of guilt when creating

over-the-top erotic stories. thankfully, you are both

a skilled writer and a guiltless dreamer.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
HOLY COW!!!

Un-friggin-believable! Loved it. though e-cup reproduction monsters are a little cliche you pulled it off awsomely!

like i said- HOLY COW!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
jeezzzzzz

loved it. couldn't get enough. the faedophia ones are also v. good. Keep writing man

cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Amazing

That was beautiful

LunaWindLunaWindover 11 years ago
Wha?

That ending was just... Off. The whole story seemed like Harrison and Astarte were going to wind up together, and then, poof! Nope. And his version of pennance seemed equally strange to me.

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