by Samshaan
Love this story, real situation, sexy as hell and something I fantasise about happening with my wife
It's always great to hear about a couple's first journey into sharing a wife. Please let us know how things progressed. And please ignore the hateful comments you are sure to receive, just delete them like most authors do now.
Go back for bathroom and do not opened the door so loudly. Also do not be sharing more incidents please.
Won't ask you to stop writing.... but start writing stuff that is erotic to read... take your own time while writing stories and give more space for sex
......this exciting story. Damn, it's given me a chubby, and I hope that all goes well in your experiences.
Clearly English isn't your first language, but if you allow for that it is a good start. Please continue this, but at the start include a disclaimer saying the story includes hot wife/wife sharing/cuckoldry.
That disclaimer means the people who claim to dislike that type of story can avoid it (but many of them will still read it and still say they disliked it).
It's like you have passed school. For that standard the story is passable. But readers here really want Post Graduate Stuff. Story has imagination but lacking in erotic skills. Hope your next experience will be great.
The tags already says that, anytime the words, hot wife, are in the tags, you can assume it's a cuckold story. They are all the same, no matter who writes them. If that turns you on, by all means, knock yourself out. Personally, I don't read them, especially when the word "indian" is included. Haven't read one yet that's worth reading. My opinion only, just as valid as yours. The comments, however, are priceless, love the bitch sessions of the willing cuckolds trying to defend themselves.