All Comments on 'Entirely My Fault, I'm Sorry'

by katiepj

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
THE TAKING OF MOM

GREAT STORY FANTASTIC WRITING. ENTIRELY MY FAULT IM SORRY.

READ THIS VERY EROTIC HORNY STORY.DO HOPE THERE ANOTHER PART OF THIS EXCITING STORY.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
the story has a great plot

Great Plot... thought the sex was a little rushed... and laying in bed together during storm could have been drawn out a little more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Not bad

Better than most of the shit posted on here these days. A good plot but a little quick to end. It got to the point too fast. A little more build up.

lesliejoneslesliejonesalmost 15 years ago
enjoyed it

You did a nice job of showing her understandable reluctance yet the overpowering need that got her into the act. I liked the way you set it up and the conflicting emotions you showed swirling in her head.

motherfucker74motherfucker74almost 15 years ago
Good short story

Most stories this short usually are rushed, but somehow even though yours are short, they are anything but rushed. Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice but too quick

Great set up and I loved when the Mom ran into the shower. But then it escalated too quickly into sex. They should have had more encounters, teasing us readers, and slowly building into sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More chapters please.

Fantastic beginning. I loved reading this story. Please write more parts to this story as it deserves to be continued. Tell us more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Very hot...

... and thoroughly believable.

Erotica at its best. I love your stories.

Thank you,

Norman

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
the best fuck his mother's ever had

This could be classified as a short-short story, but considering all the overly long Mom-son stories on Literotica this is a nice change of pace. At 18, son Henry is at the top of his sexual potency. He's a tall, good-looking nicely built lad, and his Mom thinks the world of him. Circumstances conspire to find mother and son naked in the shower room, and Hank's inborn motherfucking instinct kicks in. HIs big dick is very stiff and demanding, and he just has to ease the pressure in his teenage balls. His mother's feeble protests are for naught as her son throws her down on the bed, views her splayed maternal twat with primal lust, and proceeds to fuck the shit out of her! Very soon Mom gets with the program, moans with pleasure, and her boy finally blows his needful balls, creaming his own birth canal! It's just the beginning of years of happy motherfucking for this loving pair.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Outstanding story.

I hope you will continue this story, it is too good to leave as is.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Spontaneous lust

that leads to taboo sex. Great story, hot and erotic. ML

jim2268jim2268over 14 years ago
taking his wet mom

fantastic story entirely my fault im sorry.

awesome writing do hope there another part.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Great story

I hope he talks his mom into letting him to fuck her a lot more.Thanks.....Rich

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 14 years ago
Liked it a lot!

Would have enjoyed just a bit of a more leisurely build up, but I enjoyed the story very much. Well-written and very hot.

oldwayneoldwayneover 14 years ago
Great little story!

This may have been your best yet. Your work always leaves me wanting more. Keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW..............

you are a talented writer Katiepj.Mother/son stories are the best and yours are no exception....i love the way they innocently started in the shower then later when the mother took chargethat way so hot!Please continue with more..p.s,are your stories based on fact?.p.p.s,your pic reminds me of a goddess that should be ravished/adored all her life....A beautiful face plus a hot body..Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
excellent

So very well written!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good liked the story

Good story u need to write like this all your life

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice

they would not find out however evidence come to deliver nine months later

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
katiepj, you tried too hard on this one

too cute by half

actually they both know.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

would been a 5 but the shit hole ???? no

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great story.

Thanks love the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

Damn you write hot stories

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
ANOTHER ONE SHORT AND SWEET !!!! ^*!^*!^*!

IT WAS A GOOD STORY..............THANKS FOR THE READ

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

The woman has a daughter older than her only son? I will not delve into what could urge a mother to seduce her son. She had an emergency and that became a sexual encounter. I would have done the same to my mother, boys love their mother. She fingered his rectum, giving a peek at pegging or her giving him a hint as to what she wants. I will read the other stories to see what else the writer wants to tell us.

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