by MALIBUMAN666
I found this installment of "Everything Has a Price" a little more representative of what I perceive the relationship between loving partners in a D/s relationship to be like, although I still find the Mistress/slave dialogue somewhat stiff and formulaic. Overall, I'm enjoying this series, but not nearly as much as your earlier stories.
Mmmm, god, I love the tease and denial in this. Especially the bit where he realizes that he's left with a hard, aching cock while she's getting herself off! Hot. :)