by Keat
Great continuation of the series. The buildup is quite good so due continue in your excellant fashion.
What happeneds to Kevin and Ann do they get the promotion that Kevin deserves i hope Ann didnt get Any diseases like hiv .
Pat .
Atlanta,Ga.
As a writer Keat, you have every right to write what u want - what ever the hell it is. What this whiney fucker doesn't seem to understand is that no one has a gun to his head telling him to read anything.
What is even sadder is that the pathetic prick doesn't even have the balls to sign in and then abuse/flame other people. Even when he still knows that he will remain anonymous.
Yeah, I refer to your anonymous spammer in the singular tense - because it pretty evident that it's the same looser who wrote all the flames. YO idiot - try and change your style of writing and use different words. If you have enough of brains to do so, that is.
I can't even imagine how pathetic this fuckers life must be if he is taking the time and effort to criticize a story on literotica.
Me, now I am here to jack off - and I love your story for the same reason. Different strokes for different folks I guess. Keep up your writing and ignore the flamers - they aren't worth your time.
As a writer, I get all sorts of comments. Almost all of them have been extremely useful, even what some would call flames. That people respond emotionally to what you write is high praise.
I happen to know that there is a significient number of folks who enjoy the cuckohld fantasy because they think of themselves as the Bull. (I think that's the correct term.)
Wanting to take advantage of a wimp certainly doesn't make one a wimp. Yet isn't the pleasure in understanding just how total is the wimps' humiliation? To do that you would need to write from the wimps' POV.
I have no respect for wimps, I never have and wouldn't share my mate. However, I have, long before I met my wife, been involved in situations where I've had another's woman while he was present. It's not uncommon for orgies to have unattached males. I have to say that while I never verbally abused a man in that situation, it was a trip to know I was taking what was his.
So, if I were interested in writing this sort of story, how could it be written in such a way as to avoid all of the low scores that wimp stories generate?
It's always the reader's choice to go ahead and read every hard hitting little paragraph. This story is obviously not a romance. Why are some of you so fearfully fascinated that you must read on... and on... against your wishes?
I liked the story. I only wished that the women enjoyed it more, just like most wives in real life enjoy other men more than they enjoy thier wimpy husbands.
You've got something great here. Go all out.
Ignore the flames. You can tell they're ashamed that your writing turns them on. They're so busy jacking off with one hand that their posts barely make any sense.
Obviously there are some readers who don't enjoy the story. So they can stop reading it. Many of us are enjoying it very much, and looking forward to each new installment.
So please don't keep us waiting too long!
Thanks, ohio
the storyline is awesome make them fuck more of the ex
Lisa's refusal to lick her own shit off the executives cock will cost her. He husban ought to raise hell with her.
expected Ann's experience on blowjob with chairman in detail...she is a beauty. Please add another chapter on it....
5, to average the anon idiots usual one star. His prose is sublime.