by GeorgeTasker
this series so far is wonderful. I followed a link from favorites(john_evans) to here, george is awesome.
thanks for the stories! keep writing!
the ass fuck does not fit the "first time" scenario; neither does the "pull out" and come on her tits. Who in their right mind would ask a kid to stop his first fuck so he wouldn't come inside the woman? Totally stupid. If Dad had mentally reversed their roles, it would have been stupid to him also. I realize you are trying to portray the Dad as a little "left of center", but stopping his first fuck is beyond ridiculous. Good news: I like the eroticism of the scenarios in the first 3 chapters. Locations and situations are as important to the "heat" as actual word description.
And I don't like Howard even if he had this good idea to let his son lose his virginity.
I am reading this story again after ten years. Those were the times with very slow dial up internet connection and I could not give my comment. And today I was pleasantly surprised that you have further added to a chapter after ten years. I look forward to that chapter. See you then!