All Comments on '"Fantasy" Football Draft'

peaked, peeked or piqued?

So erotic and well written. One can read the story and practically envision himself/herself in that very basement wink wink !! THANK YOU

Hey Pirate. Loved your Elaine story. I think she's so hot.

Great Story. have anyopenings in your fantasy football League. haha

cant wait to hear more about Elaine.

If you can, look through it - her panties are taken off twice.

Aww ........... with football over i guess there's always hope for next year's fantasy football leagues ahem ahem ?? I've reread this story numerous times and even to this day i get sooo sooo aroused reading it again hmmmmm !!!

Being a follower of Elaine I can appreciate this story so much. The fantasy and being a part of it is most definitely a huge turn-on. Great job Pirate!!

Not bad, but... It's "piqued" not "peaked" and "yeah" not "yea." Also, is there a reason Elaine is the only character with a name? There's nothing to differentiate one male character from another.

I think my wife would love to be in her place. No, I'm sure of it.

Love this story !! I knew an Elaine years ago in college who I can just picture being this sexy !!! Thanks for the writing !

This was well written: fluid and plausible. It was also very arousing.

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After all these years I can read this story and stil get that same ummmmmm tingle in my undies as the first time pirate had sent it to me as a draft wink wink!!

I finally found this story! I had seen a partial of it on an email sent to my wife while I was getting her decrepit laptop repaired!! I cant believe I'm now able to finally finish this story which I've saved and can't wait to read it after all these years. Just guess who is my wife ????