All Comments on 'Fantasy To Reality Ch. 02'

You worry if the story you wrote didn't go over the top. Not for me it didn't. I hope you will continue to write more about the humiliations that she has her husband go through. It could be with either a man or a woman, both are sexy and arousing. Although I must confess that the humiliation of him in front of another woman by his own wife gives it an extra spice. I hope that in a next episode they will take it further

Well you asked

Judging by the vast # (1)of responses thus far - most of us wouldn't dignify what you wrote by responding.

I guess this sick stuff is ok for those who it turns on -but even for them I feel this was slanted so far that its beyond belief - a loving husband treated this way? No balance - most dom's are more fair than you portray!

She even forgot to help him get off - no respect = no loving marriage - where are you at when you write this stuff???

Do you feel we are so enthralled with your brutality of your loving spouse that You/we forgot the basic balance of life?

I probably should not have responded but because you have a talent to write I felt that perhaps you could appreciate a viewpoint of reason - balance - the consequences of life which affect even an appreciation of the written word.

But perhaps you don't care - we'll see.

I cannot wait to see how far she can take him, I think this is just the begining.

I really liked that story. I am sure some people might think it was to over the top and others would have wanted more. As long as you had fun writing it, that is the most important thing.

I hope you decide to write more.

Thank You for sharing.

Wish my wife was like yours

Very convincing hope to see more

10 out of 5stars.....that's what I think

Keep writing this story