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while reading thi horny little escapade, i was thinking what an exceptional illustrated submission it could have been!!!

What a great story and very erotic descriptions. I love how uninhibited you are!

To someone who's hard for you.

I have been enjoying this and some of your other stories - very nice work - I hope you will continue writing and sharing!

This would make a fabulous video. Loved the teasing but I got lost who was doing what. WHEW!

Such a sexy story, it's got me masturbating! :-)

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You started by saying you didn't want to do anything with James-he's your husband. Dean, and James somehow got mixed up in the opening so the story looked like Dean was husband. And how did you get James to serve drinks to everyone while Dean just sat there with you?

I'm as eager as Dean for the next part of this adventure! Maybe in the illustrated section so we can all enjoy your hot body Haley?