All Comments on 'Father's Day Present'

To get angry when she had hypnotised the son so the father could have him.

Randy, you are compiling a very entertaining body of work. I always check out your newest post. And this latest is one of my favorites. I thought it was just different enough to stand out. But it could have been so much better! I get the feeling it might have been written as a lark - something you tossed off rather quickly. But think of the possibilities.

I would have loved to see the wife discovering her husband's gay porn stash, her realizing how stimulating it was for her, and then realizing that he was making their son the focus of his gay fantasies and that the idea of her husband having sex with their son was even more of a turn on for her.

Then she gets the idea of trying to make it actually happen - as much for herself as for her husband. We could see her researching hypnosis and then using it on her son.

You could have then switched perspectives and showed how her husband and son had already become lovers. It would have been delicious to see her son going along with her hypnosis efforts and then telling his dad all about them. And then the two of them planning on going along with her scheme in order to find out exactly what she wanted to have happen between them. I think that would have been a delightful story. And, of course, incredibly hot.

I for one enjoy incest stories that include elements of male bisexuality. But it REALLY turns me on when the wife and mother is just as turned on by it - if not even more so - as the husband and son.

So, Randy, keep writing and posting. Your devoted fan looks forward to your next effort.

VegasMike155

Omg I loved this story! Well written and great two see two men enjoying each other’s bodies. Well done!

5 stars. hope there's a chapter 2!

That was the beginning of a great story. Love the sex between mom and son and then dad and son and what is truly great is the interaction and sex between all three. What a great climax. Mom surely loved to be fucked by both dad and son.

You had things set up perfectly for Simon to fuck his fathers ass as Daddy was fucking mommy's cunt, or as Mommy sat on top of Daddy cowboy style Simon fucked his Mommy's ass so that all three were getting fucked at the same time. Yes, you at least got her spit fucked. Oh well, what do I know, you're the writer.

Everything else was fun, but her tantrum in the middle is really jarring.

This was a good story of incest and how it developed along. Had me hands 🙌🏻 in my pants stroking away at the pleasure.