by PerfectVerticalSmile
You've done something really extraordinary here -- you've written about insecurity in a way that's wonderfully sexy! I didn't think that could be done, but this is so immediate and so real and so incredibly erotic. Thank you! I don't often come across something that seems truly fresh in here.
Your prose is evocative and clean and you never use a word you don't need. I aspire to that! Congratulations on a beautiful piece, and please keep writing!