by snakeeyes148
Absolutely fantastically scorching hot . I came twice reading this .
half a story at the most in order to be any good this needs atleast one more chapter two would be better as is it sucks. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A WHOLE LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND EITHER FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T START AT ALL NOW START WRITING OR ERASING ONE OR THE OTHER
still no proper end after five years time to delete until you can properly finish it.