by Alan D
A marvellous second part to this story. I do hope that you are goig to add a third episode and keep the story going. I hope that he gets together with them back home, and maybe even marries Kathy. Don't wait too long for another story, as you're among the best writers around.
couldn't get past the part where Jeff urges the girls to touch their mother's pussy. That's a line that just shouldn't be crossed, in my opinion. Sorry.
One of the true gems. I know I will enjoy reading the rest of you submissions.
Top story, please keep writing them. I like the idea of continuing your stories.
Dude, These [ hobson's choice an fisher's catch] are truely amazzin. Luv the way u rite.
Keep up the good work dude, for our sakes.
thanks boss
It has been a while since I read this series. The characters are beautiful, the sexual tension is palpable and the overall effect is very stimulating. Great job! It would be fun to follow the girls as they grow and explore as well as get Kathy and Jeff back together.
Very hot
I felt this was classified incorrectly. This started off reasonably well..but detiorated when it became a 'family' thing.
YOUR STORY SHOULD BE REQUIRED READING, FOR ALL YOUNG MEN.I AM 67 AND WOULD HAVE BEEN A BETTER LOVER IN MY YOUTH IF I HAD THIS GUIDANCE. IT WASN'T TILL MY THIRD LOVER THAT I WAS ABLE TO GIVE A WOMAN A GOOD CLIMAX AND WHAT A SUPRISE TO BOTH OF US. AFTER THAT I SLOWED DOWN AND TRIED TO GET MORE FUN FOR HER TO GREAT AVAIL.
Thnak you for a super romantic tale. OooH the thought of being with those three insatiable women, makes me feel jealous. A super well crafted story full of emotion and romance.
Well Done
I don't know, how many times I read both your stories and I still love them.
Hope dies last and so I am still looking for another one of your fine stories.
Please write more you are a talented writer I enjoy reading your work
This is a great tale, and you're a talented writer. I hope we will get the chance to read more tales from you!
Have you ever considered of making a seqel of Fisher's Catch? Maybe a couple of years after the end of this one. It would be amazing if the girls could bring their own boyfriends in the action.
I'd love to read something like that!
Thanks for what you do!