All Comments on 'Fists of Repentance Ch. 03'

Please do keep it up. It's great the way you have taken the time and words to focus on this one coupling. The great details and the situation together are what make it hot. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

"...mouth gouging her flaming cunt..." What a crock! This "writer" is throwing random words together hoping fools will accept them as legitimate descriptors.

The author simply will not allow editors to help him polish, strengthen and generally improve his prose. No, no; those of us who complain about his horrible writing are anal-compulsive sticks-in-the-mud, this isn't an English class, blah blahblah blahblah. Author: GET A CLUE! Your writing is EXECRABLE! It is WORSE than bad. You need HELP to get these stories flowing! [I bitch because I care. Granted more about English than about you, but still...]

Probably one of the strongest orgasms I have had in awhile. The idiots below are just that, idiots. Your writing is very descriptive and original.

Keep writing.

Some would not recognise extreme erotica even if it grabbed them by the balls or c...,as the case may be

I think your writing & story-telling is excellent. Beautiful descriptive and the themes are deliciously depraved.