All Comments on 'Following on from a Strange Request Ch. 04'

Maybe you should change the story description from <i>Mom blows son when he tells her too and he loses his cherry.</i> on over to <i>Mom blows son when he tells her to and he loses his cherry.</i>

It's bad grammar. If you can't find what the difference is between the two, then nobody can help you.

I like how you are moving away from the other stories into your own total direction. The pacing to this story is fantastic, and I really like Maria. With three such strong and interesting characters it would be a shame to just let them "rut in peace!" Thanks again for a great story!

I would have liked a more detailed description of the sex with Maria. The story is really great though. Thanks for your efforts, your stories are always fun to read!

Your story is flowing nicely. I love the new developments. Keep going with the story. His mom is going to have to pay for surprising him. Can't wait for the next chapter.

"... intense and purposes..." should be "... intents and purposes"

Thanks for writing, spelling and grammar mistakes really do take away from the story though.

Delicious!

Danm lucky boy

Found you, through "The Deal" Love this series and the "No regrets" but though I'm just about caught up on that series and overall I think I like that one better than this one. This "episode" is my favorite thus far.

You lost me at &ldquo;whinging&rdquo;.

That completely ruined my mood and dropped all arousel. As if the arse is magic and putting something plastic in it turns you gay.

Finally, the son has real sex with someone other than himself.