All Comments on 'From Bible to Bedroom'

Your story is so hot that it made me oozing

Fingering daughter on her 18th birthday is really innovative

Make her your property by ...... You know .... By anal sex

More please

Pretty good style for a first effort.

It made my pussy ache. Can't wait to read more.

Just a little too fast and a little too short, but a good first time story

I would be interested in reading more of this story line. Ok you wrote a short story that quickly led to Cassie's first orgasm, but in that short story you hooked me. Maybe the next story can be more of her father introducing her to pleasure before he teaches her to pleasure him. I think it has potential to be a good series.

I loved it! Please write some more?

I definitely think you should continue this story. Wow!

Holy fuck, write some more, my pussy is wet, but need more to come with her!!!!

I'm Sooo wet! He OWNS her. He can teach her anything he wants. Depraved things. I live in a conservative christian hamlet and the families engaged in the many fetishes is amazing to behold. Our Minister had his wife and three girls all pregnant at once and he would rub their bellies. I started getting naked spankings when I started sprouting little titties and Daddy or Mommy would stroke my happy place in between licks. This is just the beginning for her. She has so much to learn from Mommy and Daddy. I like this.

is a success. Quite well written and very erotic. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.

Stupid, you're stupid.

To the person who wrote it was stupid, you write something better instead of posting anonymous comments putting other people down.

My cock is rock hard in this fantasy world that I've always avoided. Being a father, I am totally freaked by the idea of father/daughter sex, but somehow I could read this story without feeling that it impinged on my personal attitude towards incest. So you have written a hot little scene of innocence overpowered with lust in the most delicious little scene of fatherly love. But what is making me even hotter is the comments from female readers about how wet this story is making them. Fuck me, I so fucking aroused by this . . . now on to part two . . .

You are an awesome writer!! Just lay back and enjoy the feeling of knowing and embracing that. Good girl :-)

....and bored the frack outta me

This short story made me so wet! Reminds me of how my daddy taught me about sex. He was the first man to ever touch my cunt and I still am addicted to his beautiful cock. Can't wait to visit him again and feel his huge cock in all my greedy holes. I'm a true daddy's girl. ;)

It felt rushed; No plot development. Your grammar was alright, but the writing fell short. I would have liked to see more rising actions. It needed more description. Also highly unrealistic that a church girl is wearing jeans.

I thought there was too much extraneous detail. However I would have liked more emotional detail

More please angel...

would have been much better and more realistic without the incest element

"Well," he began, "it means that in all aspects that you would obey and take care of your husband, then you must obey and take care of your father."

I guess what you meant to write was the opposite

"Well," he began, "it means that in all aspects that you would obey and take care of your father, then you must obey and take care of your husband."