All Comments on 'From Mother-In-Law to Lover'

This was a very hot story. Just the right amount of crudeness sugar coated with love and affection

Amazing story please do a follow up and complete the circle with his new wife getting pregnant and having the son she always wanted

Who is the grandson on page 3? I thought he had a daughter/grandaughter ? Sure spoilt the whole thing for me !

Good character development and a realistic situation. Similar relationships have developed when a death or divorce brings people together for sake of child or children. Good job!

...and should use cum instead of come!

Your writing just gets better and better. You write believable, fully rounded characters, not just the usual cartoon MILF nonsense, and in consequence there is a real frisson as Pat gives in to her passions. I come here for erotica, and like most men, I'm not a reader of romantic fiction per se, but I found the relationship described both real and really affecting. That adds so much.

After the build-up, the pay-off is amazing, In contrast so many Lit hacks, the writing is clearly the work of someone who's been there and back and knows how to please a woman. On a personal level, I share the narrators' 'thing for lingerie' and particularly appreciated the detailed description of Pat's outfits, and her sensual disrobing.

Superb. More, please!

I enjoyed the story very much. Thank you for writing a believable work.

He was a bit of a git at times, pouting like a spoilt little boy when he didn't get his way. Annabelle switched genders. But most confusing was the timeline. Marriage, 6 months later birth of Annabelle, long drawn out divorce, walks in park, seduction, separate Christmas, time together, time apart, relapse, time apart, divorce, 3 years since marriage, Christmas in Europe, you must be at least this tall to get on this ride. Do we really have a 3 year old at EuroDisney?

I have always had a thing for my mother in law Darci. I have tried to get her to give in on a few occasions but nothing has developed. I always offer to help her with things and adore her. Darci if you ever read this you know where to find me.

UNFINISHED??? Best I could give was 3***.

Waiting for the next part..............

Would love to see the next chapter. Older women can get pregnant!

This dude really is a total asswipe. He takes somebody else's wife, completely shits on her beliefs, and marries her later on. Never mind that literally everything they are doing together is wrong, that cheating is wrong. This is what society is becoming. Jesus.

I am not a good literature critic, but the best story here I have read! And I've read a lot!

An excellent story with highly plausible storyline. Probably my joint favourite. I love mother-in-law stories as I had a stunner myself, long since departed sadly.

Excellent story, very loving, I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you

Excellent story, right amount of sex, passion and story.

Superbly written. An excellent story that is well balanced. I am a huge fan of mother-in-law stories and for me, never see and have the opportunity to read enough of them.

I had an absolute head turning stunner of a mother-in-law, who was 21 years older than me and whom I continue to fantasise over, even though she passed away some years back. However, the memory of her is everlasting. She retained her beauty until the end.

Love to read a sequel

Hot and really well told

This was a wonderful journey. The attraction and the love they shared felt so real. I really, really enjoy the build-up and acceptance. Even the issues felt relatable. Just need some editing though.

I had known my mil for around 3 years before we fell in love and became lovers. We found that we had a lot in common, we both love art and painting and long walks during the summer to explore the countryside. As we got closer to each other we realised how much we enjoyed each others company, on a few occasions we would finish our walks with a kiss and a little cuddle. This eventually lead to more serious petting when we both realised we were falling in love with each other. I had fathered two boys with her daughter, mil only had one child who was now my wife, she regretted the fact that she never had a son but father in law did not want any more children he thought it was too much responsibility. On one of our walks it started to rain and we managed to find an old abandoned barn for shelter, we sat on some straw and started to take off some of our wet clothes to dry, mil had got down to her underwear revealing a white pair of silk French knickers and matching bra. Looking at her in this sexy outfit my cock responded, we were alone and I wanted to make love to her right there and then. I pulled her close and we kissed with great passion it was then she felt the bulge in my underpants she reached down and started to rub my cock slowly then pulling me down onto the straw she said "come on this is what we both want, lets do it." My pent up feeling for her caused me to enter her straight away up the leg of her knickers and into her waiting love channel, she responded by wrapping her legs around my waist and pulling me inside her when we both realised at that moment that I had no condoms "You will have to pull out before you cum she whispered i could get pregnant" How I managed to pull out in the excitement of the moment I don't know but pull out I did and shot a massive load of sperm over her knickers and bra. We lay there for a moment in our embrace with my seed now starting to run down her legs it was time to clean up, her knickers were too soiled to put back on so she rolled them up and put them in her jacket pocket, she decided to walk home knickerless with the proceeds of our union in her pocket. Part 2 to follow