by acurrentaffair
The intensity of that fuck was great. I am curious to see where this goes.
One of the best stories I've read in a long time! keep going... maybe include her breast size in the next chapter
Am afraid this sort of story is not for me,Iread it out of curiousity,Ifelt it just debased women,the sort of story that could be written on a lavatory wall.That`s just my opinion as others seemed to love it.I like a bit more love and tenderness to go with a sexy story to get me sexually aroused,so this was not for me.
I love this angle of cheating. The cheating fetish on Literotica is usually dominated by wives and girlfriends cheating on their guys (which I don't mind at all), but being a guy I prefer reading kinky stories where the women are being cheated on. There aren't too many authors that can pull this off correctly. Congratulations that you did on this first chapter, and preferably on the following chapters.
Hopefully the story doesn't evolve to where there's a predictable threesome, as far too many stories take this route. Keep the dirty talk and the erotic situations going - Because having a wet bed when the girlfriend arrives is definitely kinky. And there's plenty more.
How does Jane get out of this? Do they continue? How did they even start fucking each other in the first place?
Definitely continue please.
This was the second story I read just after cumming, I was instantly hard again and came a second time... first story was all build up, this one delivered from the the start... please continue where you left off, looking forward to it!
I'm seeing a shocked Andrea, acting angry but getting turned on, realizing Jane had fucked her boyfriend, he gets out the shower thinking that she's pissed but instead she admits how much she wants a three way and demands they show her how they were fucking before she came home... she watches in jealousy and delight before stripping and joining them this time...or they could just both join him in the shower after Jane admits everything confronting Andrea... a lot of directions to go... love it... more, please more!
Would like to see the softer more loving side of the guy come out toward Andrea when she's involved too... more body descriptions, and perhaps with an explanation of how they got to together and started fucking in the first place, perhaps trying to explain to Andrea...
not a bad story but promoting unnecessary sexual violence - I didn't believe the woman was really into it. Made it less hot.