All Comments on 'Full Obedience'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice to see a story from you

It was well written. I always enjoy a good inner voice adding to the facts of the action. I don't have a problem with the consensual sharing. All it took was a brief mention of a safeword to provide so much support to the story. (Although the thought of punishment for using it almost negates that.) I've never liked the set up to fail concept. I suppose it can be fun and playful for both, but here it seemed to be emotionally hurtful to her. If he wants to cane her, it seems she would not object. Don't play mean games. For a master to intentionally cause emotional pain is sad to me. She got bunch of orgasms. Later will she still feel guilty for failing an order and for coming with someone else? The specific failure was not specifically addressed so it is very possible. His praise was too general.

HardBenHardBenover 6 years ago
GREAT STORY

A really interesting theme, and written, as always, with wonderful craft.

Fabulously erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

This is hot as fuck! Great read.

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 5 years ago
Her Master - the Asshole

Setting a subbie up for failure is mean and an asshole thing to do. Setting them up with a caning punishment is worse and deserves a thought of if one wants to continue this relationship with a liar.

Babsy830Babsy8303 months ago

Hot stuff. Sizzle sizzle sizzle

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