by nikki_2021
Two chick dudes cumming in each others mouths was pretty aweseome!
It is just so sad... That you didn't keep going, it would have been a great chapter if you told Venus about what truly happened. Come on keep writing, keep writing, keep writing, you were one of my first reads and still one of my favs, just havn't put you in my favs.
I agree this is a great story please go 1 or 2 more chapters its really good now Ergon has a reputation of being hung like a horse more girls will want in I bet. Keep up the great work
It was good.
The first part [the three-some] was a little bit cunfusing, but all in all it was good.
Now I realy want to be Harry Potter and have you with me at scorcery school.
Your making Sarrisa really sound like a bitch. She know he doesnt like anal. she does it anyways and then starts making future plans about doing it again in his male form...
Girls don't understand that heterosexual men hate even the thought of being thought gay. It makes them feel emasculated, less of a man. Thanks for sharing.