All Comments on 'Fun at the B&B'

I do hope that's not the last part of this story. Perhaps your best.

And damn, that profile picture. Cover that shit up!

Still makes you a Troll !

Where's those Billygoat's when you need them ?

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I love stories told by the wife and yours was one of the best please keep up the good work

This had a brisk ‘Girls Rule, Boys Drool‘ cabaret sensibility. I enjoyed it, but was tantalized by possiblity of Tommy's mom joining in when frolic got discovered.

Full marks * * * * *

Very hot and exciting!!! Congratulations!

Very hot and exciting!!! Congratulations!!!

5 stars.

You certainly are Stillfun.

Hope this is part one of many.

This is porn written with great style . Loved it.

So glad you're writing again. Love your stories.

Good story and realistically written

Really enjoy all your stories, believable characters and well written. Looking forward to future story submissions.

Developing the characters makes the sex so personal. The description of the scenes and action makes it all clear in the readers mind and excites the sexy parts!

Great story you should have his parents join. Bet Tommy had his mom too.

Hot stuff!

I love this authors ability to tell the story of the build up, the tease. How she loves the attention, hubby encourages her. I gave it 5 stars!

Thanks for a great story. As the story began and as the characters were revealed, I hoped for a threesome. The story covers many categories well.

That is an amazing story.

Please write a second part soon

Good story well written

Another great story by Imstillfun, I thoroughly enjoy all of your stories and this one will move right to the top of the spank bank. Keep up the great work and keep writing those stories.

Exhibitionism is a sexy way to ease into sharing. I didn't use to fantasize about watching my wife get fucked until I started cajoling her into going out without her bra and panties. She's even "accidentally" let a nipple slip now and then. Makes me imagine many naughty things...

Sexy couple! Sexy story!

I enjoy all of your stories, the pic on your bio page is hot too FYI.

Utterly predictable: the idiot husband; the brainless wife; the limp, lifeless 'plot'. How many times can this boring story be written? Obviously many times, since it appears so often, almost always without wit, tension or mystery.

I would have expected nothing less from you I always enjoy your stories.

You knocked one out of the park...

You told your chosen story very well. It's not exactly my cup of tea, but I can still enjoy it. Thanks cd

You have a way of telling a story that constantly flows and builds. Very nice indeed.

Loved this story!...super Hottt!!;

more...

This is my perfect fantasy. To watch my wife get eaten out while I suck her tits. Then watch the guy kneel up and fuck her right in front of me.

Now watch the sewer rats score this high. Something wrong with people like that. 90% or more of stories posted in loving wives is pure trash written for the rats that crawl out of the sewer. ONE STAR

I love a tale where the husband puts his wife with a much younger man and watches the excitement.

I’m not a woman, but you did a great job writing this from a woman’s perspective. Most men would love to be in this kind of situation, so it’s easy to develop their responses. But most women are reluctant due to the lack of emotional connection to her new lover. You covered her reluctance very well. Great story!

A wife experiencing sexual love and lust in a threesome with her husband and a new male friend. Wonderful! You have a way of translating the emotions and thrills of mfm that reached this reader.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.com

It so funny when others try to post anonymously but post the same as they do under their user name. 26thNC's attempt to act like this wasn't him is pitiful. We get it, you hate this topic, but I'm not sure if it is yourself you are trying to convince, since all you do is spend hours a day reading these stories. Can we say major loser?

I love the story of a married older wife having sex with a younger (legal aged) boy! I hope you write more. My preference is for the older wife to be impregnated!

She needs to give a special night in return??

What the hell are you whining about now? I love this story by one of the best authors in LW. I don't hesitate to tell you what I think under my 26thNC name. I don't post under any other. I certainly didn't have to steal someone else's name for my own. How did I get in your heads so completely that you look for my comments on every story? Read and comment on the damned story, stop concerning yourself with what I do or say. You appear to have your own problems.

I agree with the above commenter regarding a threesome that's pre-planned and mutually agreed on. Due to a health issue, I'm impotent and cannot satisfy my wife sexually. Over the years during our sexual tryst she had expressed a fantasy of being taken by 2 men at once. This has been my fantasy too. Recently I have suggested that we find a young man (much younger than her, we are in our 60's) that could satisfy her sexual needs. So far she has declined to go thru with it.

This is a very interesting story with a lot of potential for more sharig. Male voyeurism, female exhibition, stag husband wanting to see his vixen wife pleasured... Recipe for success. Full of love.

Hope there is more!

Just run. He's really fantasizing about that male someone else kissing him. You married a cuck/queer. Just file the papers and go to the MAN store. If you're half of what he described you have a very loving and loyal marriage waiting for you. Let this pervert utilize some other woman for his cuck fetish. Pathetic.

Tommy should give her a baby bump as a reminder of her fuck filled weekend

I liked your story! Too bad the father didn't get some too; maybe after the son left. I think I would have liked a little more initial shyness/reluctance but It was good.

That Dunkirk dude sure has a baby bump fixation. Give it a rest man.

Liked this one alot. Had it all without getting into any bi-sexual male themes. I close stories when that happens. Looking at the volume of your writing I will definitely read some of them. A few more like this and you become a 'favorite.' Keep writing and thank you.

Awful subject , awful writing , awful beginning , awful middle , awful ending .

In closing , I think it was just ............. Awful .

Love your work Keep em coming & CUMING

Great story. Well written and very stimulating. Our first threesome was at a B&B in Napa Valley a few years ago. Meet a handsome black man at breakfast, kept running into him at the different wineries. Started hinging out together and had dinner. My husband invited him to our room for another bottle of wine. He stayed the night and most of the next day. Something we found my husband loves to watch.

Does the father get to play in chapter two?

I liked the story. It was fun to read that Tommy's parents new and were cool with it.

I would have liked her to have gotten nude at the pool. While out for dinner, they could have purchased a new thong or gstring to wear at the pool the next day. Or, she cold have worn only the cover-up to breakfast then put on the bikini bottoms at the pool.

Unlike another reader, I would have liked to see some bi action between Tommy and Justin. Maybe chapter 2??? Maybe add another couple or the parents???

Good start!

Justin and Karen seem to be just like Bill and I, right down to involving someone named Tommy. We've been there too.

Lovely pacing and hot as hell. I'd love to read more.

Liked reading this ‘long weekend’ tale. My main quibble is that Sweetie is not so much an adventurous wife ... but Hubby is an adventurous husband. Sweetie is mainly just going with Hubby’s flow, even though it is taking her where she is happy to be going. That leads to a problem in story-telling. There is much less tension (aka drama) when both protagonists are on the same page, even though Hubby is several paragraphs ahead. If there were to be more episodes, the couple’s relationship would still be virtually unchanged. There is no compromises or adjustments that need to be negotiated.

That also means that the Bullock and his folks are underutilized in this tale. I would have considered posing Tommy as a virgin, or as a more experienced player.

4.6 = 5*

One of my favorites. A 5* rating. The author has a way of making the reader feel like a voyeur. The sex was very erotic. The wife's shyness, and reluctance added to her allure. It made her all the more desirable. As her husband I would hope that she would never lose that. Wonderful sexy story.

Another great story from one of my favorite authors. The reason I keep checking Literotica is to see if you've posted again.

While I enjoyed the story, there were a couple of minor typos (What the hell, were/we're on vacation) and at one point Justin became Jim. I have had the same types of problems when I write.

Look forward to seeing more from you soon!

Very hot story! I agree with a few of the comments about some of the typo’s, however, they were minor and didn’t change the effectiveness of the story like some other authors have. My only issue was when Justin became Jim for about two paragraphs and that was only an issue because I tend to not read the 3+ pagers in one sitting. So when I picked it back up I was lost for a brief second.

They still have one last day at the B&B, correct? Would love to see the decompress/reconnection with the two. What about the parents who very clearly witnessed her cumming. Do they take it one step further and play with them?

Great story! 5* 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

Super sexy as always!

You developed her slowly, husband didn't press her but just arranged for things to progress. Very enjoyable.

You are so GOOD at getting the sexxxy slut to show off and allowing the boys to get worked up to the point that they all give in to it! I think hubby should hve dp'ed her with the young stud. I suppose you don't want them all to end the same, but most guys would love to dp their wife. Nicely done

Oh my. I would love to see a pic of you in that bathing suit, after the way you described it! And later when you go to breakfast without your top, with just the see-through cover-up... even sexier picture in my mind. VERY arousing work. Loved it.

Is there are second part to this??

Outstanding, sexy as hell

Is there a second part to this??

Love the story, it's great how it builds to the inevitable climax.

Part 2 please !!!

What a fantastic story! The build-up was wonderful, holding my anticipation all the way through. The characters were well-developed and interesting. The only thing lacking was the next chapter. What’s going to happen with Tommy’s parents? I’m betting that the adventures continue.

Thanks for this story. Now I have to go back to your other stories and devour some more.

Another stupid cuck story.

Ugh!

Another stupid comment

If you don't the stuff move on without comment please

I loved this story.. great the way it built up.. I just knew she was gonna get fucked by Tommy but when..where.. how... the erotic excitement was super..and the best thing was hubby was involved and there for her.. not like some stories where the wife runs off fucking behind hubby's back...5 stars

Just love how you tell the story, set the mood, give a back story and easy into the good wife giving into her sexual fantasies. I have fucked my wife on a balcony And in a public swimming pool hoping someone someone was watching. Would love to put on a show.

First, loved the story! However. The empty spaces in the vignettes we can forgive and gloss over. But to have the parents duck in and duck out was first, too short and needed fleshed out more, and second, just pushing the line of credibility. (It's almost an "Oh, excuse us!" when they would rather linger, enjoying the titillation.) But, I also find it a wonderful avenue to add a sequel where there's a foursome with the parents. No?

As usual

Great fantasy loved it

Some sexy parts, but the Brit-style writing, he said, she said; my husband, over and over, are major annoyances.

Wow, such a great story, very real. I've enjoyed fucking my wife on a balcony while on holidays, it gets us both very aroused, especially when we talk of someone or a couple watching. The dirty talk between them on page one is what I love. Maybe we will someday have a third person with us too? For now the fantasy is enough. Please keep writing, I'm going to read your other stories.

Super hot story. Biggest fantasy is watching my wife get fucked by a younger guy. Here’s too. This feeds the fire!

I've been in the same situation as described in this story, my husband and another man having sex with me, such a turn on ! Very well written story.

Don't know what it would feel like in reality, but imagining it is AMAZING. Five stars!

I would love to have that adventure with my wife. Hot as hell!

Don't understand all these dumb husbands wanting to share their wife. I'm an equal opportunity sex man. A good friend of mine Jim warned me I should keep an eye on my wife Anne. He said he didn't want to cause trouble but damn sure wouldn't like it if his wife acted like he seen my wife acting and told what all he seen and showed me pictures. I thought 2 can play this game. The following weekend we went out with some friends. Diane was a single friend and I flirted hard with her. It didn't take long for my wife to catch on and cut in on Diane then Anne started chewing on me about my behavior. I looked at her and asked is it OK for you but not me let's go talk but I need the restroom first. When I finished in the restroom I took my phone and text the pictures Jim had sent me. When I got to the table she just looked at me and motioned me to set next to her. I did. She leaned to me saying she was sorry and could I please forgive her? I asked be truthful can you? Yes she said. Did you have sex with him? NO I did not. I said we will talk later. OK and things are good!

I gave it 5 stars! I think the next chapter could include hubby and the young stud dp'ing the hottie. Sequel?

If there were any degree of reality here the second chapter would be the full on divorce.

Good story and well written. It revived memories of an episode when I was an 18-year old ‘Tommy’ and an acquaintance offered me his gorgeous 22-year old girlfriend. She smiled, making it clear that the offer included more than a cup of tea and a friendly chat. We then spent several energetic Sunday afternoons sharing her glorious beauty before they decided to end their hospitality. I remain eternally grateful to them both and I often wonder where they are now? 5 stars.

There should have been a DP then anothee threesome at the pool next morning

This was hot... The idea of being out of town with my wife where she could anonymously bring out her wild side. FUCK YES! This could have been longer with Justin and Tommy spit roasting her. Tommy did have her ass ready, after all....

What sickoes!

How could any sane man share out his wife & what kind of slut would put up with him.

Bill S.

Your writing is amazing! Every story that I’ve read makes you feel like you’re in the moment with them. Some of the best storytelling I’ve ever had the pleasure to enjoy.

HOT! Loved the story building to what we knew was coming.

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8.3k followers, for the biggest cuck author on the site? I had no idea there were that many closeted fags that read Liter regularly.

Loved the build up with this story. I like how the story ends. It leaves the reader wanting more ... does Tommy fuck her again? Does she have more hotwife adventures when returning home or was this just a vacation hotwife fantasy fulfilled? Does Tommy continue seducing and fucking more women at his parent's B&B? Are the B&B owners also swingers (they seemed to have no issues with Tommy fucking their guests)?

So many questions, which leaves the reader to conjure up their own continuing story lines. Lovely!

I’d like it if my wife was to let me watch another man fuck her. She says she doesn’t want it, but there’s times when she’s talking with a guy and I can see chemistry between them. Maybe someday she’ll give in to urges that I’m pretty sure she has for another man’s cock to fuck her. I only hope I can be there to watch it.

"Loving Wives: Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more". Perfect example of the genre'. 5*

I loved the sex in this story, and completely am into one woman with two guys - a common theme for this author. Other commenters suggested they DP her, since Tommy did have his thumb up her ass, it seems like she was able. That would have been hot for the next day perhaps. I'd LOVE going on vacay and having my loving wife get fucked by a young stud while I help. This one gets 5 stars from me.

Love your story's can't wait to read this one to my wife

Loved how this story progressed from beginning to end. Can totally imagine us doing this. So hot how she was fucked at the end with her husbands help. I would have liked her to be a bit more submissive but that’s just our kink. Would love for a part 2 to see what happens next but I guess that’s what our imagination is for!

easy 5 star Ioved it.

Lucky Tommy... Lucky Justin..... This scenario is super hot. This one could get a sequel. Tommy is eager for more after Justin? Or... They BOTH take her at the same time! She loves being the center of attention.

Excellent