by DCdoneright
Better if you had dropped the 'it's a real story' that nobody cares about and just wrote as a story.
Liked it. Felt like (wished) I was there. Good story well told. Where the heck were all these nudists when I was on the prowl?
5 stars
Cheers
SAGE
Love all of your stories, but just reread this one and noticed it says you have a follow-on story with Amanda, but I don't see it. Hope you haven't dropped writing, but if inclined, please write the follow-on that you mention in the last paragraph. No way did this girl not want to see you again!