All Comments on 'Further Negotiations'

If you are into strict female domination and I am this story is perfect! Janet is not afraid to control men with her sexual favors! I'm excited to see just what she'll make him do for her! Great read if you enjoy stroking while getting into the story.

That was Really Great Not only it was Hot but Loved how you wrote your Character to feel more Realistic in Terms of his Reactions. Also Loved how this doesn't feel like a Smut Story. A Wonderful Short Read Can't stop reading it. And that leads me to my little Grip about this story and that is that I feel it should be a little longer but not too like 200 pages or anything, may be just extended by maybe three or four more paragraphs should be perfect. Just to tell how else the Step Mom would Dominate The Step Son and how they would feel and act when Dad is around.