by sajukno
Steam rose from my computer, as I read this. I didn't know whether to envy the demon, or the knight.
This is only the first chapter, and I'm so in love with Mary and Enn. Not only was your story arousing, but it was entertaining, too!
Some HAS to illustrate this story. These is a very fun read, please finish the series. And someone PLEASE illustrate this!!!
this was five stars all the way... normally I have the computer read aloud and do stuff around the house and stay product... got to say, this was distracting to say the least... going to be some crazy dreams tonight lol
Pretty good, despite the crudeness of the descriptions; “railroaded the hot cunt”, “fuckmeat”, etc.
I think the story would have benefitted from a bit more exposition and descriptive prose. One page is very short, another page would not have put people off.
Let’s see how the next chapter is.