by Goldeniangel
A very different story than one is used to at Literotica. That being said, it is sweet and charming. I enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the further adventures of Fuzz.
He is a brave little warrior.
Traveller
Great job, I love how you take us into the body of a kitten. Again, very original, and very well written. I'm really impressed. I can't wait for the next installment.
Bri
Now that Fuzz Growl Maria and who knows who else who might join later (author–wink wink), are developing their little personalities and relationships. I could better understand when I last felt similar warmth.
The mental and physical effort of Fuzz to remain dignified at all cost, or to understand all that is confusing or scary remind me of the most classic of all: A.A. Milne’s: Winnie the Pooh. There too, you find a similar combination of animals and humans. Each animal has its own personality and traits. They interact with each other on much richer level than with humans, but a loving child like Maria (or Christopher Robin) is never too far behind in understanding what’s going on. Fuzz seems to have a combination of traits from some of the main animals in Milne’s book But by all means – Fuzz is his own cat! BTW, I am not claiming any direct influence, merely similarity. Fuzz has some of the gloominess and pessimism of Eeyore ; Piglet’s nervousness; Roo’s curiosity; and the beginning of Winnie’s reasoning ! Growl on the other hand is akin to the exuberant personality, and of course the jumpiness of Tigger. Maria of course has the love and sensitivity not unlike Christopher Robin…
p.s. Any news from publishers yet? No pressure, but not much is left of my nails…
My cat acted the exact same way when we tried to take him for a walk. So undignified! Lol
What a sweet story! You really managed to get into Fuzz's head. That's exactly what must go through a cat's mind.
Very refreshing to see something in this vein and to see it so well done thank you for brightening my day.