All Comments on 'Gargi Ch. 01'

As usual you have a great skill of narration of story. Flow of story is very good. Keep it up.

Want more..I know little marathi...so got double excited...more more more

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Please continue..... it will be a great series, specially the marathi dialogues are something different

I am a marathi reader and this is by far one of the best stories I’ve read. Girl next door is a very common fantasy but the gradual Developement of the story makes it even more beautiful. 👍

Welcome back you are my favorite author kindly write more & more stories.

simply superb this story.

Your story with Swati is one of my best all time memories. This too comes close. Though I am not a Marathi by birth, but years of being a Punekar, relating to the story is natural. Keep up!

It is just awesome how your stories depict the eroticism in everyday life.

While erotica is one more pattern in the kaleidoscope called life, your stories give the event the intensity and beauty it deserves. Thank you.

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