All Comments on 'Gathering Storm Ch. 04'

Although extremely well written,i'm sorry to say i am begining to find this boring.This must be one of the most unrealistic stories i've read on here.How long is this going to drag on before the the blokes dick drops off from continuous sex and purile teasing.I hope there is a decent ending where it all goes tits up for him,and not the obvious sex with mother and daughter plus all the riches scenario......Just my opinion, needs more erotic story and less sexual content to give your mind something to conjugate over.

One misstep and you fall into the abyss. He must keep his resolve ... or, as he put it, he will loose them both.

You're about to drive me crazy. (Don't need any help going there!) I can honestly promise ypu one thing; You keep writing them, and I'll keep reading them.