All Comments on 'Generation of Tarts Ch. 01'

you are off to a great start. You have left a number of possible avenues to proceed with your story-line and have me, for one, now awaiting your next chapter. As I'm sure I am not the only reader now under your spell, do not keep us waiting long for the next chapter, please.

Nice story. Older women can be of so much help to young guys. It can be awobdeful experience.

Keep it coming.

He should have caught his Grand before she was able to get up the steps. Now he has it a lot harder to explain to Grand that he wants to fuck her and use her body.

One thing may be a plus to him though, that he has leverage on his Grand now, and he can get his Grand to be submissive to him, and he can control the way the sex will go now. But he has to do it before she gets her shit together, and starts to tell his mother.

Please keep up your writing and explore this genre to its fullest. The saggy woman is full of possibilities.

I wish I was as lucky as you as you have just done my fantasy

new: unused, opposite to old / knew: had knowledge of, past tense of know

crutch: an implement to lean on when injured / crotch: where the legs meet

"she dropped one of her hands onto his crutch" conjures up a different image than intended, which breaks the flow of reading. Otherwise good.

Went out the window in this one. 1*.

The sex scene was well written and, for me, the lead up was not over long. Look forward to reading the other stories in the series.