by Joe Brolly
Oh come on man, soooo good i was just gettin into the whole thing and you end it this way awww damn lol, GREAT JOB keep it up and keep them comoin
I don't know what you do for your day job but I have a suggestion for you.... Quit your day job and go write for a living. You are a better writer than a lot of the published authors I have read. Thank you for taking the time to share with us your creations,
Sky.
And it has a lot of the guilty pleasure that are like junk food for me in a fantasy such as this.
Well Done.
I like how the story let them actually "discuss" the genie master relationship, her duties and all....
other stories just go over this topic briefly by saying : "look here these are the rules, we can bent them this way but not the other"-end.
although the short chapters still pisses me off.