by Joe Brolly
Very hot, at the end. The product information part at the beginning, I found a little long and dry, but the scene in the coffee shop was great. Can't wait for the next chapter.
FOR MORE... I always check everyday man... hope you have a muse to look after you so I can bask in your talent ^_^
Please keep these sections coming!! This is some of the most entertaining reading that I have ever found--anywhere. You have an extraordinary talent that we all enjoy. Thank you so much.
"After quite awhile at this,......he left that breast to reconsider its selfishness, and tried the other. After even greater efforts, and still having no luck, he was on his way back to the first to see if it had changed its mind, when......"
Absolutely nice including humor.