All Comments on 'Getting Even with Gemma and Jane'

Jane was only the collateral for the real target – her nasty and emasculating sister. Too bad for Jane who happened to be the sister of the hated boss, right? Let’s say that in order to get to the sister he had to take those blackmailing photos of Jane. But why the whole long humiliation process of Jane? He never really cared about her security bridge and other than being timid and naive he does not seem to have any grudge against her. When she asks why you are doing this to me, his good answer – because I can… Hey, who could argue with such a strong argument…<P>

I am not trying to be extra righteous here, but the whole story builds on this moral grudge against Jane's sister, being unjustly viscous and hypocritical towards him. His solution is to jump on the first opportunity and to do the same to his subordinate as his boss does to him (but there is a “good reason” - getting back at the sister). Worse, he does not even seem to enjoy doing anything sexual with her except for humiliating this very timid person. Wow, what a man! Now tell us that you squashed an ant and got some real excitement out of it…. <P>

Other than that you write very well.

Well, having just found this gem of a blackmail story, I will probably be disappointed in the ending since there are only three chapters. Jane was only collateral damage to his desire to get back at Gemma. He stretched her about as far as he could go and Jane could have stopped it but did not. He was at least somewhat concerned a few times that he may have taken this part too far. Did Jane deserve the initial humiliation of him taking her to various places and putting her on the spot? Yes, for sure. I am glad that he did not force her into rape. He only spanked her a few times which is a good thing for a somewhat good guy that is in his position to humiliate another person. Reasonably a good story to start. Unfortunately the author has not published anything else for 13+ years ago. Well written and gets the readers involved. Hopefully Jane comes out of this ok.