by HStoner
This definitely deserves a part 2. These is an exciting tease and its fun to imagine what happens next
Great start! I can see this being a long series with different characters joining their social circle. A grade of FIVE for sure.
You always have the most delicious stories. I couldn't stop reading.
Cheers!
The almost dry way it's getting arranged, and simultaneously the fact they obviously had done their homework and tought this over a good bit... well at part it's the author's recognizable style, but I think it plays well in this. At the same time allowing me an ironic thought, aren't they getting an slightly underpaid lawyer too out of this? But hey, the immaterial bonuses are promising to be great.
How lucky can one guy be. I thought Peter to be a little conservative, but he was in a doctor's care. Don't for get sunblock
...and sexy as hell! Well Done - enjoyed both parts... maybe a part three is in the works...????
That is no doubt what Peter was thinking. Great story with an unusual intro. What fun!