All Comments on 'Give Me, Another, Hand'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
so where are the "nude livers"?

the story is "meh" but i LOL'd at the typo in the description...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
As Lurch (from "The Addams Family") would say: ..".uhhhhhhhh..."

Dummy, they live nude, so they are "nude livers", simple...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
not bad great premise

but should of been longer and needed a lot more backstory on who's who(maybe my fault not reading previous story)and the Alison story was just weird unless explained in previous story/s

Will go back read previous stuff & update my comment(if needed)

Chas1051Chas1051over 8 years ago
A great start

This is a great start to the continuing advenutres and I look forward to the completion of this chapter plus the back story and amalgamation of Alison and her story into the "Give Me A Hand" senario.

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