by MisterReason
I believe Literotica should also have listings added: sick,
very sick, sickest-at least a reader would not waste time on garbage. This story is the product of a sick mind.
I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my story. I do regret that it upset you so much, but I would also like to remind you that it is a STORY. It is also properly placed in the Incest category. Therefore I am puzzled as to whether you thought this particular story is sick or whether you think the whole subject is perverse.
No matter, but once again, it is only a story, but I do thank you for reading it and bashing it.
Well written, context was caring, and loving from all aspects. Ignore any negativity from the fantasy dead individuals. Wish I had the same opportunities as Grandpa!
It was an interesting theme with attention paid to the building up of each episode however the ending was rushed leaving the reader wanting closure. The Grandpa character was full and rounded until the end when he then turned into a flat dirty old man and the reader had an eww feeling at the end.
What an excellent story! Plot and porn - my favourite type. Your writing is excellent, a pleasure to read.
I loved the story until the end. Of course it would be just like an insensetive cheating fucking man to use his sick wife to gain more pussy! Guess it didn't matter that she cooked for him, cleaned after him and fucked him all those years. No woman deserves to be degraded that way. Ur a sick fuck!!!
Thanks for the entertaining story. It really was a fun read. I'm a little puzzled by the nature of the negative comments. These seem to be made by folks who would move to Paris and then be highly offended by the fact that so many people there just happen to speak French.
It's pretty sad when it takes them reading all 7 chapters to
decide this story is revolting. I. personally thought it was one of the better stories published on Literotica and I've been reading this site for over 8 years. Keep up the great writing.
Your story is well written and very sexy. Would have rated you higher but thought the story lost a little bit of its punch to the end with angie and then the wifes stroke. but still loved it. thank you
I thought this story was great. At first I didn't really like Molly, but she definitely grew on me, and when Angie came along I just wanted her to leave so Grandpa and Molly could have time to themselves!
I hope you make another part to this story, with Grandpa and Molly. :D
- Faded
All of Grandpa & Molly was good reading; especially around part 5; your humor really shined through then. Your ending was very good as the 'let down' was NOT too abrupt...yet a really good slow down to the 'train ride'...with still a bit of humor hanging around. Thanks!!
I was curious as to how the story would end from the beginning.. Nice twist at the end....
I was really loving the series until it got to the ending. I was really intrigued by the addition of Gail but The rest just ruined the rest of the story. You should have probably killed grandma off besides keeping her alive and brain dead while still fucking her. I think you would have had better spin off points had you have done it this way.