All Comments on 'Hans' Maids - Pt. 01: The Older One'

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12bolt12boltover 2 years ago

Thank you, Enjoyed the well written and descriptive story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It was good and much longer than I imagined. Just when you read he was wanting to suck her tips, he doesn't, then finally two pages down he does. I am one who is especially turned on by stimulation of the nipples or forget it. Could of been even more tit sucking for me!!!

Cobalt_BluesCobalt_Bluesabout 1 year ago

So well written ! Really enjoyed it!

LevindlLevindlabout 1 year ago

The story in itself is fantastic! What was extremely enjoyable for me was your constant change in verbiage and description. You could be speaking about the same thing over and over, yet using so many different words to express the same thing, making it seem like a totally new experience.

Extremely high level of quality in your writing. Thank you.

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