All Comments on 'Hardwood'

of the older man/younger woman story does it again! What a treat; a glorious, hot, sweet, have-to-remodel-my-kitchen-NOW treat. Michael can explore my grooves with his tongue any time.

The author needs to proof read the story. There are typo's and other items to be fixed. One serious item needing attention is the frequent and over use of "word ... word," "word -- word," and "word - word," it the intent is to indicate a pause then grammer has changed as the that was one function of a coma (,); authors need to relearn this. Another flaw is in referring to a female student its "coed" not "co-ed" which is a mixed group of both sexes.

Woodsmith or wordsmith, this is one of the best stories I ever read.

Loved the story! I may have to re-read it again to find all the errors somebody was complaining about! I had absolutely no problem reading it so any errors must not have been too noticeable. I do not understand someone reading a story and having nothing to say except complaints about errors. For crying out loud, if the errors are bothering you that much quit reading, find another story that is error free, or switch to reading a college composition text book! It would probably (?) be error free but boring as hell.

I liked your theme as well as your plot, your descriptions and writing. Thanks for an interesting interlude, sir, and please continue.

I have to agree with the other posters - there were errors? I was too caught up in the story to have noticed any of them, if they were there! I do find it interesting however that the people who complain the most seem to be anonymous. I wish lit didn't accept such posts - own up to what you have to say. That being said....

This was an incredible story - loved the plot, the descriptions and the build up. Being female, I can relate exactly to her thoughts of how she wanted it to go from a fantasy to reality and schemed how to do so. Yeah!! She pulled it off. Other than the hot sex scene, my favorite part was when she felt the various woods.... very hot!

Thank you for sharing this story with us - I look forward to checking out your other stories.

Very hot - they say that 'ladies love tradies' - and with a fantasy this hot - who wouldn't?

This is the first of your submissions I have come across - I'm off now to read some more!

P.S: I'd not be at all worried about criticism by an anonymous post who can't even check his/her own comment for grammatical and spelling errors...

Geothermal steam compressed into three pages.

I have never commented on any of the stories I read, but I just have to now. This was one of my fantasies come to life. WOW. Older guys just do it for me. I loved your style of writing as well. Am totally trembling and wet after reading that! Can't wait to read your other stories

Paid for writing like this.... YOU SHOULD!!!!!

High energy for both lovers. One was schooled and one went back to further her education. The only mistake here is I'm not Michael.

Very well done

I wish that was me getting pounded like that, gosh. Great story, can't wait for more from this author!