All Comments on 'Heat'

I follow your work in other categories. It is an unexpected treat to to find this. Nice wake up with AM coffee. Thanks

I'm not usually a Non-Human fan, the only thing close was SS06's "Fur" (the version on the other site is better, by the way!), but when Todd asked me to review this I was happy to do so, and am I glad I did!

I totally got into this, though I could slap myself for missing the hint of a three-way for his Dad!

I would love to read about Dad and Aunt Selene in Yosemite if you choose to write it. Thanks.

...but for Todd, I'm willing to make an exception.

Good story

Excellent story in a category I normally don't read.

Since it's you, Todd, I had to read it.

5 stars and looking forward to your next story.

Thank you for writing.

and then a Vamp comes along. TK U MLJ LV NV

...a good writer is a good writer.

Loved this silly erotic tale about getting some tail.

5*

Thanks for sharing.

on 'non-human' but this was a hoot. If only.........

I really like all of your 'shameless shack' stuff. Some of the best on Lit. Thanks for your efforts and for sharing.

Nice. Wasn't quite expecting that, but still an extremely good read

Inept with NO writing skill in sight ! "1*" !!

What a fun read! Thank you!!

Don't know how i missed this.

Nice take on an old tale.

I really enjoy your stories!

Your wife is so lucky. With this much wild and woolyness in your stories, I bet you guys have a lot of fun - and I mean that on any levels.

And on another note, I never before seriously thought of publishing my collection of "orc" porn. Never thought anyone might be interested, but hey, maybe it's worth a try.

I like the fact that you don't explain too much, and I like the fact that you added the line about "cleaning up". Yes, it's a fantasy, but that was a comforting touch.

But, a full moon rises at sunset and sets at sunrise. (Each day it rises about, roughly, 55 'ish' minutes later than the day before). So, in the story someone said the moon rose at 3:30 - I'm guessing in the afternoon. Wow. They must be fairly far north and in the winter, for sunset (not dusk) to be at 3:20.

But a great fun story.

Even though I have never gotten into most other storylines I very much enjoyed this story. Guess I’ll have to expand my reading a bit.

Thank you

which is a psycho-psychotic in nature abutting on homocidal. TK U MLJ LV NV

A different bit of writing from you. But good writing as usual and a great story.

Every buddy likes pussy------cats! Nice story.

@49greg you've never seen the moon in the sky while the sun is still out? I have

For those who want to throw their money at todd here is a comment that he put in a place where very few would read it.

We have novelized the first three Needles and Delaney stories into an ebook on Amazon, titled, originally enough as "Needles and Delaney." We did that partly because so many have asked us to, partly because it was just something new to do, and partly as to protect the work - there are people who skim sites for stories then publish them as ebooks under false names. Some of the real heavy hitters here have had that happen to them.

Doc Spirit 3

Nice. A gorgeous werecat tamed by sex. Seems to work for angry edgy wives as well. And coeds around exams and tests.

Wildly creative and fun. Wish it was longer. Very entertaining.

Nice! Could elaborate on what goes on in his mind when they are just getting started in the bedroom.

LOOL Great. starts out slow, normal and builds up.

Nice story, read it before but didn't remember it, which doesn't mean anything. Been reading on LIT for years. Mostly LW but Romance also. Not a believer in sex just for sex as so many LW wives do. I believe sex is a very intimate thing and having sex with with a member of the opposite sex is pretty much a bonding thing, at least for me and maybe others. I bought and read Todd's Needles and Delaney and it was very good having it all in one place.

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Excellente!

Mas puh-puh-puhleeze!

11/10!!!!!

TOO SHORT!! More please.

Really strange it a great way!!

It's nice to be able to help others out when they have a need, lol. The sex kind of surprised me because normally it's only suggested, not so graphic. Not complaining mind you, just saying. Enjoyed the story, thanks.

Oooh! I liked auntie Selene. I want one!

Fun stuff. Thanks.

Fun story! Great fantasy!

What a twist on an old familiar legend. It was innovative and very creative. It had more erotica than most of your other writings. It seems you have a compulsion to write with meaning and detail. Much kudos for your supporting spouse. (Mine would have so jealous before she split from me...)

Loved it!

Way more fun than the usual werewolf porn on Lit. Even though it was short, your characters shine.