All Comments on 'Helpless'

I LOVE when a woman takes over another person's life and when she is another woman it only makes it better. Turning a young lady into a lesbian is the absolute epitome of dominance. Thank you for a great story.

Loved the story bit the ending was somewhat abrupt. Will there be another story to continue this storyline

I stop writing when I get to what feels like a natural stopping point. My writing starts to feel forced and clumsy if I go past that point. But sometimes I pick up the story again days, weeks or even years later. The first episode of my story "A Night at the Opera" sat there for two years before an idea for Chapter 2 popped into my head. Chapter 4.5 of "The Regional Directors' Meeting" came 10 years after Chapter 4.

i loved this story. it made me so wet, i was reading it while in a work zoom meeting.

Thanks! It's every writer's dream to draw a strong response from a reader.

A most impressive beginning that feels just like a wonderful first chapter. Please continue. This is one of those rare not PC lesbian domination stories where there are no "already-lesbian" alibis.

FABOULISTIC

Sooooo good! Made my panties very wet

Hang on there! Where is part 2?

What happens? Do they fall in love? Does the girl become a slave? What happens if she disobeys, how is she punished? Is she happy? You simply cannot leave this hanging!

This needs to be continued. Please, Very excellent.

That was incredibly hot. Made my panties sooo creamy wet.

Abrupt ending. We need more! :) Well done!

Good story!

Definitely needs a part 2, please?

This story follows a video called “Please Make Me Lesbian #4” almost beat for beat. And that’s not to disparage the author if they did adapt a scene from that movie into a short story, they did such a good job and I feel like this actually adds things you couldn’t really get from a visual medium like internal dialogue. So amazing job! I love it.

My cunt was on fire reading this.Well done !