All Comments on 'Her Reviewer's Reward'

Great work, I think you did a good job with the female voice and perspective. I especially liked the moments at the beginning, when she is secretly reading his comments about her, it made the action part more passionate. Descriptions were on point and I thought you did a great job representing a woman who had not had her first experience with sex yet.

@OliviaWindsor, Thank you for the great comment! I really appreciate the feedback.

A very enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. I've read some of your other submissions too. I have liked what I've read so far. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Great story! This deserves a part 2... becoming a couple, going to prom, etc etc