All Comments on 'Here's to you Mrs. Robinson Pt. 02'

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Jerryr6Jerryr6over 2 years ago

Wonderfully erotic story. Please continue. Five stars.

acevitalacevitalover 2 years ago

What a fantastic erotic story !!! It doesn't always have to be sex, wonderfully written how the two women implement their photo session idea, whereby the question is, will Tonya take part in the pictures again? I'm eagerly awaiting Ryan's reaction when he sees the albums. And what Tonya experiences with Ryan (when Lindsey watches) will also be very interesting. Exciting what happens then ... Please keep writing.

OOAAOOAAover 2 years ago

Really HOT!!!! I like it very much!!! Congratulations!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good premise.

But too much ABOUT sex, not actual, ongoing sex -- which is still abbreviated.

Four stars.

OGHMNWOGHMNWover 2 years ago

Excellent continuation to the story. It’s a natural procession of the storyline and unrushed. Looking forward to reading the next chapter of this hot erotic story that is very possible. Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I think that watching is foreplay for the next lover, before yiu meet them.

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Started writing as submissions on the old Voyeurweb.com bulletin boards. Found I had a bit of a knack for stories that people like, and just continued. I love to hear back from readers when they like a story, or with story ideas, suggestions, or just discussions on anything.