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Editor needed for a better understanding of English

It's a Great start !!!!!

Nice try. Good concept but poor execution. Due to the names I take it that English is not your first language. Your sentence structures were all over the place. It was fragmented and the pace seemed to veer from place to place w/o making much sense. I strongly suggest rewriting this, let an English speaking editor proof read your work and then submitting. Good luck.