All Comments on 'Hidden Behind Her Blue Eyes'

Gina, I loved your story. Thank you for taking the time to write it, and share it with us.Now I'm going to read your others!

This was a great story with a wonderful build-up. Where are all the black haired, blue-eyed girls? I guess not in Virginia. I'm going to have to move to Texas.

Very well written. I'm usually not into group sex involving other guys. I guess most guys aren't, although I could be wrong. But this was very nicely done. More please!

Quoting Vicky is the best compliment I can think of!

And, I think Gina should have put a disclaimer at the beginning warning the reader to buckle up, because the whole thing was one hell of a ride!

Awesome, awesome story! Very vivid, and incredibly well written!

Very hot and well written story. What would life have been If I met a girl like that in my youth?

What a suberbly sext story

BUT - not quite like that weekend would make! EXCELLENT!!

Another fabulous story by Gina. Your detail and continuity is excellent. Keep writing PLEASE!

Having read only as far as chapter 3, i have to say I'll give it the perfect score. Gina, keep going!

I read a lot of stories on here and very few get above a 4 star from me. I save 5 stars for the ones the move me in a positive emotional way. Great of the male lead to work through his feelings and come out for the better. Hope this was the start of several chapters. Has the making of an instant classic like many from HeyAll or BlueDragonAuthor

not wishing to change any plans, sorta expected Jake and Rick to get "it" on? Vicki is nice addition, and will probably get more submissive... Well Done... five stars

Another great story, Gina. I love all of them so far.

Quite an incredible story that left me full and thick. Yo are a very good read. Now I'm going to have to read the rest.

Well done Gina, a fun hot story.

Keep them cumming :)

That was so hot!!

By far the best story I've read oh here so far.

Thank you .

Is a crappy writer! Meeting "back her", eating at the "Loan Star",...I can't remember all the mistakes!

Three's a magic number & the third one's the charm, so we'll end with a third: Whoever let this story be forced on the public site!

Seriously?

Are you an english teacher or something?

I did contact the writer about the spelling, but it didn't take away from way a GREAT story it was.

This author ROCKS!!!!!

This is a fun story. If anyone has ever been a part of group sex of any kind, you can relate.

I personally prefer spontaneous sex. The girls had every step choreographed and that made it a bit dry for me.

Was still a good read and yes I will continue on with ch.2. It wasn't THAT DRY!

I loved this story.

It is well written and easy to read.

Tina states, "I know" she said, "I'm very familiar with the double standard."

And the writer leaves it hanging without any explanation; only a continent-sized hole in the story...

THE LUCKY BASTARD! Damn. Affecting me with his blasted numbness. It's so darn hot I'm saddened by the fact that there's only 2 chapters. But still... This is a fucking hot story. So Oh Bull! Why? Why is it so freaking just 2 chapters only?! Oh bull!

Love your stories, they really are hot and exciting. Hope more are on the way.

I enjoyed this story as I have your other ones.

Maybe 'The Loan Star' in the story is like The Broker in Denver, built in a former bank building.

Though that would seem too fancy wouldn't it?

Where can I find the whole story