All Comments on 'Holly Day'

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bearleebearleeabout 16 years ago
I get to be first

Nice story

bearlee

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Very good story, with lots of actual story, and hot sex. I would have like more action on the narrator's "big boobs," and more detailed description. How big were her areolas, what color were they, how tall were her nipples, and more breast play altogether.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 8 years ago
Love it!

So much fun to read your work! Thank you!

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 8 years ago
very good

I really liked this story, it was not to long and not to short, just right

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