by dpingjessie
I sense some kind of a catch here. He's going to wake up in an ice bath with a kidney missing, isn't he?
Your comment made me laugh, but no, no one loses a kidney. Part two should be out by the end of the week.
You ruined a good story with the arse-fucking - you might find it hard to believe but quite a fair few of us heterosexual males DO NOT want to fuck anybody's arse-hole; it's the source of shit and it's very unhealthy for both partners and spreads disease! I cannot be a minority of 1 who finds this a complete turn-off
This story is continued with
Sandwiching My Ex-Girlfriend.
And, well within the promise in the author's comment,
it was submitted only 2 days later.
Although not so dogmatic/harsh as Anonymous (titled: Arseholes),
I concur in prefering to not have anal.
Years on Literotica means I have come across it so often in stories that are not in Anal category (a category I do not read) that I have somewhat gotten used to it/come to tolerate it.
The problem is more egregious in the sequel.
In order not to be a spoiler, I will not elaborate.
But watch for it, including noticing what makes it even more distasteful/unsanitary.
Another practice in these stories that I do not get -- why come ON a woman (face, breasts, wherever) instead of IN her nice, warm, wet pussy?
Well-written story.
With a theme, that, while not unique, is not common on Literotica.
Unfortunately, the reader is left to wonder why Jennifer wants to get back with him.
Paul in Oklahoma