All Comments on 'Hot Sex with the Ex'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good, but...

I sense some kind of a catch here. He's going to wake up in an ice bath with a kidney missing, isn't he?

dpingjessiedpingjessieover 8 years agoAuthor
@Anonymous

Your comment made me laugh, but no, no one loses a kidney. Part two should be out by the end of the week.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Arseholes

You ruined a good story with the arse-fucking - you might find it hard to believe but quite a fair few of us heterosexual males DO NOT want to fuck anybody's arse-hole; it's the source of shit and it's very unhealthy for both partners and spreads disease! I cannot be a minority of 1 who finds this a complete turn-off

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
To the last guy

Ahhhh, screw.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
SEQUEL

This story is continued with

Sandwiching My Ex-Girlfriend.

And, well within the promise in the author's comment,

it was submitted only 2 days later.

Although not so dogmatic/harsh as Anonymous (titled: Arseholes),

I concur in prefering to not have anal.

Years on Literotica means I have come across it so often in stories that are not in Anal category (a category I do not read) that I have somewhat gotten used to it/come to tolerate it.

The problem is more egregious in the sequel.

In order not to be a spoiler, I will not elaborate.

But watch for it, including noticing what makes it even more distasteful/unsanitary.

Another practice in these stories that I do not get -- why come ON a woman (face, breasts, wherever) instead of IN her nice, warm, wet pussy?

Well-written story.

With a theme, that, while not unique, is not common on Literotica.

Unfortunately, the reader is left to wonder why Jennifer wants to get back with him.

Paul in Oklahoma

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In the winter of 2013, I lived out my fantasy of sandwiching my best friend and object of my sexual fantasies of nearly 10 years. It inspired me to publish erotica for the first time; namely, my submission "A Delicious Jessie Sandwich. The Jessica, Part Two story in the Sexplo...