by sex4every1
Loved both chapters. 5 stars even with the rushed, poor ending! Not the kind of yarn I normally read either, but really enjoyed it. Great stuff - well done.
The second chapter in this riveting story is well-written, but much too short. Accordingly, another chapter is warranted. Five stars.
Still a good premise.
Still don't understand the kneeling on the floor to masturbate.
Sex seemed too rushed. Zoomed by the step-by-step details that would have been truly erotic.
No reluctance. None at all.
Was she on birth control? If not, awfully risky to cum in her pussy.
Four stars.
Nice of their mothers to be so dedicated to their 'game night' not to notice them either time. A well thought out and written ending chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
Awesome story! Sex events spaced out just right for good suspense. Keep up the great work!
Kids will be kids…I just wished I had met Hannah , when I was young. Not too many guys had girls lie her!
Lovely