All Comments on 'How I Became Submissive'

There are so many typos it ruins the story. You really have to check your grammar or have someone edit your story before publishing it online. The flow is interrupted in nearly every paragraph and it makes for a tough read to enjoy.

you should have eat her shit hole so he could fuck yours

Hallo W-T!

After reading your stories a friend ask me, Kat have read any of these? _ Adding they're all well written with some very kinky scat fetishes!

This guy's definitely a submissive bisexual with a major toilet fetish for Asian and African couples..

I wish they had been lesbians, so that I too could have enjoyed reading your stories.... Yes I do!

W-T, any chance you might write the lesbian version of your stories??? If needed you could ask me anything, (ANYTHING),,, a number of writers have and my name shows in the credits of a number of stories..

Gay Kat.

Ultimate fantasy for me. Thank you!

Loved it..please continue